Gradual Red Colour
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Read this other one twice please and tell me what you think.?
MOVING ON
Home for sale, put on show
Magnolia walls that 'Had to go'
Memories here so cold and few
Licks of paint, turn old to new.
You lost a hair with that first stroke
My poorly timed and tasteless joke.
More fell away throughout the night
As colours changed I held you tight.
The Sun arose, the paint now dried
I'd left for work, you left aside.
Busy, stressed, I never called,
You all alone and going bald.
So gradual our seperation
One last bout of decoration.
The final coat no words were said,
A stray hair clung to crimson red.
You knew it then, the red your blush,
I went to buy a new paintbrush.
Was trying to be deep, if you read some of my other 'poems' you'll see what I mean, tried to misdirect reader to think poem was about a couple splitting up and then reveal it was about the brush but think I gave too much away in the second verse. Thanks for the answers . x
Didn't get away with it though did I?
I loved it I give u a 10.GOD BLESS
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